Blog, Personal, Poetry Harvey August 25, 2021by Ivy I want to hear rain againlike it felt before the PTSD. water everywhere;none yet clean enough to drink. it’s like a metaphor for my life: being stuck; drowning in myself. Share this:TwitterFacebookMorePrintLinkedInRedditTumblrPinterestPocketTelegramWhatsAppSkypeEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
I like the irregular formatting here – it forms a nice allusion to the erratic downward spiral you capture best in the final half-line, “drowning in myself”. Highly evocative, miserable, and all the more alluring conceptually for it. Well done. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
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I like the irregular formatting here – it forms a nice allusion to the erratic downward spiral you capture best in the final half-line, “drowning in myself”. Highly evocative, miserable, and all the more alluring conceptually for it. Well done.
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